QT MASHUP

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A few posts back, I mentioned a research paper that I was writing. In many ways, the essay was a culmination of ideas that I discussed in my blog, including hidden curriculum and gender bias. To summarize my argument, I argued that inherently learned and socially acceptable forms of sexism are the common motivating factors behind instances of gender inequity. For the purpose of my essay, this was an effective thesis. I had close to ten pages to prove my point in careful detail and my argument was structurally designed around this theses. However, my guess is that you are already bored hearing about the structure of a research I wrote for my English class. That’s because the essay wasn’t addressed to you. Rather, as most research papers are, my paper was basically written for my grader.

 

However, luckily for you, I have created a revised digital version of my original essay which is intended for you! Unlike my research paper, this video mashup is a much more accessible form of communication which is addressed to a much wider audience. As I mentioned previously, it took close to ten pages to detail my original argument. Therefore, I chose to simplify my message down to its core for this revised version. Basically, in this new version, I want to communicate that gender issues deserve and demand more attention

tumblr_ne6gkeE8o61thgwsdo1_500.gifFurthermore, the structure and content of my video mashup are designed around this basic principle. As you likely know if you have read much of my blog, I am a huge fan of movies. Nearly half of my blog posts use movies as a lens through which to view other relevant topics that I am discussing. Therefore, from the very beginning I was inclined to design a video mashup since it meant I would be working with movie clips. After some thought, I decided to  use clips from Quentin Tarantino films including Pulp Fiction, Kill Bill, and Django Unchained. There are multiple advantages to using these films.

Firstly, these movies are so popular that they are likely to be well-known by my audience. For this reason, my hope is that I can capitalize on my audience’s preconceived admiration of these movies to increase attentiveness and encourage positive reactions to my own video. Additionally, Quentin Tarantino uses much of the same cast in many of his films. For this reason, I knew that I would have the ability to put actors and actresses in conversation with one another between multiple scenes and films. Before I talk too much about it and give away the whole thing, why don’t you just watch it?

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I am by no means an expert in video editing or film design but I hope at the very least you found my project to be interesting. I believe that one of the biggest obstacles that gender issue face today is the lack of serious attention they receive. Therefore, I believe that it is important to simply encourage people to engage the subject of gender issues wether it be through a serious academic paper, or a simple video mashup like the one I have created.

Elevator Ethics…

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Today I was standing and waiting for the elevator in my residence hall. I know, I should take the stairs. What can I say? I’m not perfect. Anyway, as I waited, I was forced to stare at an “educational” poster reading “37% of women and 42% of men” remain sexually inactive during college. As I contemplated this somewhat random statistic, I began thinking about Santa Clara University’s policies relating to sex and sexual education/preparedness. Being a Jesuit institution, Santa Clara University opposes sex before marriage.

Why then should they inform me that, “37% of women and 42% of men” remain sexually inactive during college? It is a well known fact that abstinence only sex education is an ineffective method of preventing pregnancy and sexual activity. At first, I thought that this statistic was supposed to discourage me from having sex by suggesting that a large portion of my peers are sexually inactive. However, despite the posters nagging tone, it might as well read “The majority of your peers are having sex!” because anyone with a GED should be able to do some mental math and determine that if “37% of women and 42% of men” remain sexually inactive during college, “63% of women and 58% of men” are sexually active during college.

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The more I think about it, the more I am convinced that this poster is almost laughably ineffective. Honestly, I am not even sure that the statistic is true. I tried searching for it online, but was unable to turn up the original source. Coming from the same disciplinarians who ineffectively struggle to enforce a no-alcohol policy, this poster comes off as more of a joke than a serious message.

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Furthermore, I find myself questioning the logic of Santa Clara University’s policies on sex when, walking through Benson, I see tables offering free pregnancy tests. As previously noted, Santa Clara University opposes sex before marriage. Yet, by offering up free pregnancy tests, they are acknowledging that some of their students are sexually active. In my own opinion, Santa Clara University should promote student health proactively rather than retroactively, especially given that they are seemingly aware a large portion of their students are sexually active. Therefore, if I was to be in charge, I would promote the distribution of contraception rather than the distribution of pregnancy tests which obviously do not prevent either pregnancy or the spread of sexually transmitted diseases. picture-11.png

I won’t begin to argue that any sort of changes should be made. After all, this is a Jesuit institution which is rooted in historical and traditional Jesuit values. I chose to attend a private institution and therefore I forfeited my right to complain. However, I will simply point out the ways in which these policies seem illogical from my perspective.

 

Best Actor or Actress in a Leading Role…

Chris-Rock-Promo.jpgDuring the 2016 Oscars, Chris Rock made an insightful comment about gender inequity. Essentially, Chris Rock asked why it is necessary to have separate award categories for men and women when one’s ability to act is not defined by their gender. I think that this is a really interesting idea, especially in consideration of the evolution of women’s roles in movies. Historically, women have been marginalized in film. As a trend, women are less likely to be the protagonist of a screenplay. Therefore, actresses have often had less opportunity to act in leading roles. Often times, especially in older films, female characters are stereotypical archetypes of traditional gender roles.

6a00d83451628569e201bb0835d640970d.jpgThis of course does not mean that there are no great movies with female leads. The first movie ever shot in color and one of the most successful films of all time, “Wizard of Oz,” features a female lead. However, even the “Wizard of Oz” is influenced by gender bias. As discussed in a recent TED talk, the remake of “Wizard of Oz” will be written from the perspective of the wizard thereby diminishing the role of Dorothy.

It is interesting to consider how a restructuring of the academy awards might affect gender biases. I for one believe that an elimination of the gender based award system might discourage gender bias. For example, if the “best actor in a leading role” and “best actress in a leading role,” awards were to be combined into one award, viewers of the Oscars might be less likely to mentally reinforce outdated ideas of gender roles.

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After thinking about this question from both perspectives, I believe that there is a much stronger argument in support of revising the Oscars categories than in keeping them the same. While females may be featured in leading roles less frequently, this trend is slowly changing. For example, Star Wars The Force Awakens features the first female Jedi in a leading role. While this inequity does not compare in significance to the more glaring inequities of pay discrimination and sexism, I believe that there is no strong argument for maintaining separate award categories for different genders in a society which is increasingly seeking to eliminate gender roles and stereotypes.

 

R-r-r-r-remix!

651d79758b9737bfd4d3251cab26d605.jpgRecently, I finished a research paper in which I argued that researchers frequently ignore the influence of sexism on hidden gender biases. Throughout the paper, I gave detailed examples of ways in which the hidden curriculum of classroom education features gender bias that is motivated by inherently learned and socially accepted forms of sexism. While this essay was an effective means of compiling my thoughts and evidence into one cohesive argument, it was not intended for a large audience. Rather, as my professor acknowledged during class this Wednesday, the paper was written for her, my grader.

 

In my next project, a multimodal representation of the ideas that I developed in my paper, I hope to develop a more accessible argument that might be appreciated by a larger audience. For a project to be “multimodal,” it must take advantage of a variety of technologies or methods of communication. One possibility, is to create a “remix.”

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Most likely, you have heard of a song being remixed. By taking an original source material, and editing it so that it behaves in a way it wasn’t originally intended to, an artist can express their own interpretation of another artists work. For example, in EDM music, it is very common for an artist to borrow a chorus or sample from other genres. By building a new song around these samples, artists can re-envision the sound of a song and possibly encourage alternate interpretations of the original source material.

Furthermore, remixes are often referred to as “mashups.” However, I would like to draw a
syntactical distinction between these two descriptors. While a remix may only draw from one source material, a mashup must combine at least two or more source materials into one new cohesive piece. In this way, a mashup draws upon the interaction between artists and ideas by putting two or more pieces of work in direct “communication” with one another. In order to prepare for my own project, I watched a few remixes and mashups on YouTube to see which ones were most effective. Each of these two mashups is a compilation of movie trailers.

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By combining a plethora of short clips together, each mashup claims to build one “mega trailer.” Both mashups succeed quite well in this manner. Yet, I feel that the latter of the two is stronger since it seems more like one trailer than a compilation of many. Unlike the first mashup, the second features a voiceover which effectively serves to tie all of the clips together into one.

In creating my own mashup or remix, I will hope to provide new insight to the original source material that I utilize by applying my own vision to the works that I borrow from.

 

QT and Female Leads

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Last night I watched the Quentin Tarantino film Jackie Brown for the first time. This is noteworthy because I can now honestly say that I have seen every film written and directed by the great QT. However, it is also relevant to this blog because Quentin Tarantino is not only one of the best directors of our time, but one of the most successful writers of films with female leads.

From Mia Wallace in Pulp Fiction, to Jackie Brown in Jackie Brown, to Uma Thurman as The Bride in Kill Bill Volumes 1 and 2, Quentin Tarantino’s movies frequently feature women in strong leading roles. Especially in the case of The Bride in Kill Bill, it is clear that Quentin Tarantino is making a statement about gender.

Perhaps most notably, Kill Bill makes a very clear statement against rape. Throughout the film, The Bride can be seen brutally and violently exacting her revenge upon the perpetrators of this crime making it very clear that this behavior will not be tolerated. In this fast-paced action film, it is easy to accept immediate death as the proper punishment for this heinous crime.

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Additionally, within the hidden society of assassins in Kill Bill it is clear that women are in charge. As the leader of the Yakuza crime syndicate, O-Ren Ishii surrounds herself with “an all female entourage.” In this way, as a movie, Kill Bill challenges the notion that organized crime requires male leadership and thereby affirms the independence of women. Furthermore,

“When all the fighting starts happening and the blood spills in earnest, it is the women who are formidable foes. They are the ones with personality. The men are expendable clones.”

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In this way, it is the women, in Kill Bill, who represent serious threats in the fighting scenes. This is a phenomenon so rare that it is almost unique to this movie. As I discussed in an earlier blog post, even movies which do feature powerful female characters such as the marvel superhero movies, often prioritize male characters over female characters. However, in Kill Bill, this effect is reversed so that women really do hold the power and command the authority.

As significant as these elements of feminism are, it is interesting to note that, “It only takes a minute to get used to it and accept this as the new order of things.” In this way, watching Kill Bill doesn’t feel unrealistic or exaggerated. Contrastingly, it seems very natural. By simply creating the opportunity for women to be powerful and formidable characters, Quentin Tarantino’s ingenious screenplay allows for women to showcase their full potential as both leaders and warriors. While traditional activists for gender equality are not usually arguing for a woman’s right to be a samurai, I believe that Tarantino’s method of showcasing women in this arena is an effective way to challenge traditional gender norms and suggest a new way of thinking.

 

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Rap Sexism and the Explainers

a45592babe2efb30690ade8b6f125a1cIn recently developing my thesis for an upcoming paper, I was thinking about the causes of gender inequity. After all, these issues surely must have a cause or they couldn’t possibly be so frequent. Ultimately, I realized that they must be influenced by an underlying sense of sexism that exists in our society. While not everyone is sexist, it is hard to deny that our media, and music often perpetuate sexist stereotypes. Therefore, it is hard for people to grow up in this society filled with sexist ideals without becoming at least somewhat biased either consciously or subconsciously.

 

Sexism-WoahAmong all aspects of out popular culture, one which receives frequent criticism is the rap and hip/hop community. Known for its use of sexually explicit lyrics, rap music has been labeled sexist by countless critics. In her article, “DEAR MEN, STOP EXPLAINING RAP MUSIC TO WOMEN,” Madeleine Holden challenges this claim by calling upon the critics to stop criticizing rap music and start thinking from a woman’s perspective.

According to Holden, “Being a female rap fan is generally joyous and good.” Holden birthday-song-video-oconsiders rap music to be her favorite genre and says that it can be “fun and uplifting regardless of your gender.” However, she does not deny the presence of sexist lyrics in rap music she loves. Rather, Holden says that, “generally the sexism in rap remains at a consistent and manageable level.” In this way, Holden suggests that a woman can put up with and even enjoy music which clearly features sexist elements. For me this was a very striking idea.
Next, Holden goes on to detail the “Dudes who like to explain to women how sexist rap is” or as the likes to call them, the Explainers. According to Holden, these “well meaning,” men take it upon themselves to frequently inform women that rap music is “misogynistic,” without taking into consideration that women can discern for themselves what is and isn’t sexist.

“they’re almost never discerning identifiers of what constitutes misogyny in the first place, boiling down all of hip hop to “music about strippers and pussy popping” and failing to realise that music about strippers and pussy popping isn’t inherently sexist. A hallmark of Explainers is their tendency to confuse and conflate sexual explicitness and misogyny; they display a queasiness at the idea of songs about celebrating strippers and eating ass. Songs that traffic in sexually explicit content are not axiomatically sexist, and are sometimes quite the opposite; it’s hard to tell that to Explainers, though, who assume that female listeners must be making a terrible mistake to be stanning for music that they find personally distasteful.”

In this way, Holden argues that women do not need to be told what is and isn’t sexist. Furthermore, women do not need to avoid all elements of pop culture which are sexist, because “all of pop culture is frequently sexist,” and doing so would mean avoiding all of pop culture. While Explainers may think they are doing women a service, Holden says that when you act as an Explainer, “you perpetuate a form of sexism so malevolent and insidious that it makes rap’s treatment of women seem relatively benign.”

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Sabbatical for Gender Equality

tumblr_nc8ggn9AB01snexhzo1_1280.pngIn recent news, Emma Watson actress of Hermione from the immensely popular Harry Potter series announced that she would be taking a year long sabbatical from acting in order to focus on gender equality. Unlike the typical break from work, Watson will be very busy during her time off. In an interview with feminist writer Bell Hooks, Watson said she will be reading a book a week on her own and one book a month as a part of her book club. However, that’s not all she will be doing. Watson went on to say, “I want to do a lot of listening. I want to listen to as many different women in the world as I can.” As a person of fame and fortune, Watson could certainly make a difference by merely speaking out against gender issues. However, I believe that her commitment to listen rather than speak expresses an even deeper care and interest in the subject.

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As I discussed in an earlier essay this year, one of the biggest problems in solving gender issues is getting people to care about gender issues. In my survey analysis, I found that male students at Santa Clara University became less interested in attending a guest lecture when they were informed that the lecture would be about gender studies. Therefore, in solving gender issues, one of the most important things we can do is find a way to talk about them without turning people away and making them disinterested in what we are saying.

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Furthermore, we might begin to do this by listening rather than speaking. Often times it is hard not to speak out and share your ideas. However, in situations such as these, listening to others and hearing what they have to say is a far more effective and efficient method. For example, why not simply ask male students honestly how they feel about gender issues. I can imagine that many male students might openly deny the premise that they were opposed to gender issues. However, asking them to speak about gender issues and listening to what they have to say may provide some helpful insights into their unique perspective on this issue.

As one individual male student, I can make a few conjectures as to why other male students might be disinterested in gender issues. Firstly, it seems like the only people speaking out against these issues are females. I am sure that this isn’t true, and a few minutes of research could prove that claim wrong, but the perpetuating stereotype is that females are the only ones speaking out against gender issues and this might suggest to male students that females are the only ones interested in gender issues.

Whatever the reason might be, it is true that issues of gender inequality receive less interest than they should. While this might be a result of them being considered less important than other issues including racial inequality and economic disparity, I believe that determining the male perspective on these issues would be an effective means of increasing interest in these issues.

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Psst…..Active Listening–It’s Not Just For Problems!

Research Recap

calvin-and-hobbes-fundamental-rights-largeWhile writing a previous blog post, I discovered an article about “hidden curriculum” in classrooms and found that the idea was very interesting to me. Essentially, the “hidden curriculum” refers to all of the interactions that take place in a classroom. This becomes interesting when talking about gender issues because there is a lot of evidence to suggest that gender biases are frequently perpetuated by educators through the hidden curriculum in their classrooms. To investigate this claim further, I have developed the following research question:

What role does hidden curriculum play in formulating and influencing gender bias in education?

In researching this question, I generally found two types of sources. Firstly, I found sources which detailed the observable results of gender inequity.

NoGirlsAllowedComicFixedSpelling-640x664.jpegThis sort of source typically gives specific examples of ways in which males and females are treated unequally in the classroom. For example, in her article, “How Teachers’ Hidden Biases Are Hurting Our Girls,” Soraya Chemaly details the ways in which females are being discouraged from participating in STEM subjects. According to Chemaly’s research, females are graded more harshly than males on math and science tests. In this way, although females are outperforming males on average academically, it appears that they face a grading bias which might discourage them from entering into a STEM subject.

And secondly I found sources which detailed the non observable causes of gender inequity.

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Unlike the sources I discussed above, these sources typically discussed very discreet and subtle elements of gender inequity that would be less likely to be noticed in the classroom. What makes hidden curriculum so interesting is that you may not notice it, yet it has important implications and consequences for both male and female students. For example, according to Marshall and Reinhartz in their article, “Gender Issues in the Classroom,” female students are “asked lower level questions, and are provided less constructive feedback and encouragement than boys,” in the classroom. While both of these inequities are clearly issues for female students, they are not so obvious that the student or even the teacher might catch on. Furthermore, in an even more subtle instance of gender inequity, Marshal and Reinhartz declare that a teacher’s eyesight is more frequently directed towards male students than female students following a question, subconsciously indicating that they expect a male student to answer as opposed to a female student.

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In this way, through my research I became more aware of the ways in which females are being discriminated against both noticeably and more discreetly by unfair practices in education. However, it is important to note that some sources emphasized the struggles of male students as well. For example, in her article, “The Rise of Women,” Allie Grasgreen acknowledges that male students have worse social skills than female students on average and are less likely to be punished for misbehavior thereby discouraging them from following the rules and succeeding academically.

 

While all of these issues are important, many of them are hard to address due to their subtle nature. In truth, I believe that these issues will continue to exist until sexism itself is eliminated from out society, media, and mind.

Gender Inequality in the “Super” Universe

deadpool1-gallery-imageLast night, I attended the opening night showing of Marvel Studio’s latest production, Deadpool. For those of you who don’t know, Deadpool is a joke among superheroes, a metafictional charade who is meant to seem ridiculous even within the outlandish world of Marvel. As an essentially immortal character, Deadpool is Marvel’s flip side of the “Superman coin,” who ironically contradicts most elements of “superhero” status.

Superman is not only an honorable citizen, but a member of the working class. Furthermore, Superman stands up for the values of liberty, justice, and equality that promote a just society and ultimately define him as a hero. Contrastingly, before becoming “super,” Deadpool was essentially a murderer. Deadpool is self-centered, selfish, and what occurred to me last night: possibly misogynistic?

Last night I discovered that I truly can not escape the “research mentality” that I have adopted when I found myself considering gender issues when I should have been enjoying a movie.

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MV5BMjQyODg5Njc4N15BMl5BanBnXkFtZTgwMzExMjE3NzE@._V1_SX640_SY720_As some background knowledge, you should know that Deadpool the movie is being marketed as a love story. In this way, Marvel is hoping to increase ticket sales by cramming theaters full of couples. After seeing the film, I can confirm that it contains elements of romance. However, I found that these moments were frequently overshadowed by sexist remarks and occurrences. For example, at one point in the film, after some graphic violence, Deadpool remarks something like, “At this point your girlfriend is probably wondering how you convinced her to come to this movie.” In this way, it seemed that Deadpool was belittling the women in the audience, by joking about the fact that the movie’s content was more stereotypically masculine than feminine. Furthermore, Deadpool’s love interest and the film’s main female character seemed to be an archetype of a stereotypically helpless woman. Throughout the film, she was portrayed primarily as a sex object, who was unjustifiably loyal to Deadpool.

While I am certainly playing devil’s advocate by picking apart and criticizing a movie which ultimately was a comedy and therefore should not be taken too seriously, I do believe that the super hero universe in general is biased. Consider for a moment the female protagonists of the Marvel and DC Universe. In their revealing outfits, Catwoman and Wonderwoman stand apart from their male counterparts so obviously that they each have the word “woman in their name.” Furthermore, female leads like Black Widow and Harley Quinn are known more often for their appearances than their powers or abilities. In fact, of these four female characters that I was able to think of, only Wonderwoman truly has any “super powers.”
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I believe that it is important to challenge popular media so as to continually promote a more just and equal world. However, before grabbing any pitchforks or torches, I would like to point out a few limitations to this argument. Firstly, although there are certainly many female fans of superheroes, the market for this material is primarily male. Therefore, it only makes sense that these movies should be targeted primarily towards a male audience. Additionally, while I pointed out that female super heroes often wear revealing clothing, this is not necessarily untrue of male characters. And lastly, superhero movies present their own gender issues to males. For example, they promote unrealistic expectations for strength.

Spotlight on Positivity

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Recently I watched the movie “Spotlight.” Nominated for six academy awards, including best picture, this film produced by a Santa Clara graduate features the inspiring story of the Boston Globe journalists who uncovered evidence of massive corruption in the Catholic Church.  Throughout the film I was inspired by the veracity and journalistic integrity of the members of the “Spotlight” team. Thanks to the hard work and ingenuity of these journalists, the issue of sexual abuse and pedophilia by priests in the Catholic Church is finally receiving the attention it deserves. Therefore, when I saw an online article on gender issues published by the Boston Globe, I was interested to read more. (As a side note, I will point out that I find it interesting that my perception of the credibility of the Boston Globe, as a news source, was positively impacted by a film although I had not read any of their articles.)

CMwsdIn Shannon Mokoro’s “Gender equity on college campuses,” Mokoro acknowledges that “a lot of positive movement has occurred for women in higher education.” However, this does not mean that women are not being discriminated against on college campuses today. Mokoro admits that more “still needs to be done,” and mentions some of the ways in which women are being treated unequally. In many ways, Mokoro’s article is alike many other articles that I have read on this topic. However, what I found interesting about her article was her emphasis on the societal benefits of gender equality.

half-full.gifIn my limited experience, I have found that most articles on gender studies are much more heavily focused on specific areas of inequality than on the positive advantages of gender equality. Perhaps, this is because authors assume that these advantages are obvious, and listing them would be repetitive, or perhaps this is because authors simply do not feel the need to justify equality. Whatever the reason, I found that Mokoro’s emphasis of these benefits strengthened her argument by reminding me of arguments that I already agreed with and supported.

Listing the positive benefits of “gender equity on college campuses,” Mokoro says:

“Women’s voices on college campuses are an important part of this nation’s culture and vitality. More women in the STEM fields helps the nation be more competitive internationally; equitable appointments and pay for female faculty allows for greater collegiality and productivity; support for working mothers helps to decrease absences and increase morale; and greater safety for women on campus promotes empowerment and creates an environment of mutual respect.”

dilbert_glass_half_full_of_whatWhile none of these arguments is especially controversial, I believe that listing all of them together is an effective means of emphasizing their collective importance. To use this method in my own writing, I will have to try to be more consciously aware of assumptions that I am making. Then, I will have to evaluate if any of these assumptions are worth expanding upon in my writing.